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Echo's Story

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Echo blinked open his eyes. He got up and streched his legs kicking a feathery creature. The black featherd wyvern looked
up. "Echo, you kicked me" he groaned and got up adjusting his eyes to the sunlight. "Sorry Chain" Echo blushed shyly.
"Are you going back to sleep?" Echo asked flicking his ear. "No, whats the point? I probrobly will only have one more
hour to sleep" Chain yawned and got up. Chain's black feathers almost looked grey in the sunlight, and his purple collars
were dangling becuase they were a bit too big for him. Chain looked arounf Blood Group and let out a long sigh. He
looked up to the leader's den. "Someday, I will be leader, and you will be my deputy" Chain looked up the thought excited
him. "I would... like that, I Echo promise this" Echo blinked his green eyes at the thought of it. That's all him and Chain
mostly talked about. Chain being leader and him, A deputy. Never once he thought of himself being a leader. But Echo didn't mind.
If his best friend was happy he was too. "Lets go hunting" Echo said and waited for Chain before heading out into the
forrest.

5 years Later...

Echo dropped his prey. His leader will be namming a new deputy since the old one has died. He glanced over to Chain.
Who clearly remembered Echo's prmise. But he had forgotten what happened 5 years ago. He blinked he hoped that he
would be deputy, maybe even leader one day. He heard Chain sigh and looked up at his friend. He was shakking in
excitment. Echo couln't help but let a giggle. He heard his leader, Vashe call out to the cretures below. He looked
up. "I Vashe, shall make my new deputy" she paused. "Echo!" she called. Echo blinked and looked up. He could feel
disaprovel comming from someone but he shrugged it off his eyes glittering. "Do you wish to take this role?" she asked.
"I-I do" Echo said. He could hear the roar of the crowed. Chain patted him on the back. "Good job... buddy". Was that
hostility in his voice? No, no. Chain would never be cruel to him.

The Next Day...

Echo could feel feathers brush his flank. He looked up to see Chain. "Lets hunt!" he growled. "Okay mister gumpy" Echo
teased Chain. "Come on" Chain hissed. Echo looked up it was morning... it was really early. He could have slepped for
at least another 2 hours, but he thought his friend wanted to congratulate him so he got up and followed Chain to the
forrest. "Whats up?" Echo asked as they reached the lake. He could tell that this was serious since this place never
carried prey, and always had lots of enimies. "You broke your promise" Chain almost said that in tears. "What? I...
You mean the one 5 years ago? Dude thats like forever ago". Chain let out a growl. "Tell Vashe that you want to be a
warrior, and that I should be deputy" Chain growled. "What? No!" Echo growled back "Why are making a big deal over this?
It's a pointless fight!". "No! Nothing is pointless... and since you wont agree with me I'll make you!" with that Chain
stepped on what semmed to be a button hidden in the grass. Echo felt his body lift up "AHHHH" he screamed as he was in
a net. "CHAIN LET ME DOWN THIS SECOND, AND VASHE WON'T HEAR ABOUT THIS" he growled. "NO" Chain sneered, and waked Echo
in the head so hard he was knocked unconsious.

1 Hour later...
Echo woke up but could open his eyes. He rubbed the but couldn't feel anything... but... but blood? Echo streched out
noticing the nothingness under him. He flailed in the air as he noticed that he was tied up with wire. Each leg, his
tail and his muzzle was covered with it. He clawed but only caused more blood. He tried to scream but the wire around his
muzzle scrathed him. He tried not to scream. It was hard but he managed. Where was he? He felt coldness under him. He
shivered. "I told you to back down" Chain's voice echoed arounf him. "Now, you will die, and I have the perfect lie
to tell him what heppened to you..." he herad a swish, and felt him decend into the lake. Coldness surronded him and he
could feel blood spreading in the blue pool turning it red. He had to get out! He took his front paws that were tied
together and rubbed them agaisnt his muzzel but ... was that his muzzle? It was jagged and chiped! Chain had brocken
his skull! He let out all his anger as he snapped the wire that tied his paws together. He felt the urge to breathe
but couldn't. Not yet. He swam towars what he though was up. In seconds he bobed up and down in the lack gasping for
air. He swamm towards shore and layed there. Tired and cold and weak he dazzed off to sleep.

The Dream...
Echo woke up still blind and couls feel the barbwire still... still around his muzzle. He groaned. And couls feel that
he was in the medic's room. "What..." he could talk now since the wire had lossened when he fell into the lack. But
... but he could tell he wasnt just in the medic den... he... he was in Moon Group! "Oh god I... I have died" he started
to whimper. "No young Echo. You are just here since we need to tell you something. He could tell... that voice... was it
VASHE? His leader? "Vashe? What are you doing here!". "Chain... he told everyone that you had died in battle... so
I made him my new deputy... He said he needed to talk and then... then I noticed that his collars were diffrent...
they had the same material as your... skull does... but it was died white-ish. I could tell some thing was up.
So I followed him to the border. I asked what did he want... and then he said something... he said. I killed Echo.
You should have choose me! Now it is your turn. He bite my thought and I had lost too much blood that I had lost all
3 of my lives..." she inhaled. "He is now leader. And has 9 LIVES". "Nine? But but... you are only allowed 5?". "Old
Moon Group said that he would be the best leader... I then had left... I am now joing God Group's Moon Group. Join
God Group. You will be brought saftey... and I give you... my 2 lives that I should never had lost. You knoe have 3 lives.
Use them well. With that everything had dissapered.

The Next day...
Echo got up and padded towards the God Group border... he joinend... and since that day... that terrible day. I had
vowed to KILL Chain.
Echo use to live in Blood Group ;P

Ant way lol
to lazy for another desc.
LOL
WHY WORLD WHY

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ryontail's avatar
that's an awesome story :3